Mango Man is kind of cute. Distorting the source bottle was a nice idea, but the end result is a misshapened, asymmetric container with an ill-fitting label [label's horizon line has wrong curvature]. I don't get why the woman is chest-bumping the bottle while her less-energetic clone looks on in shocked amazement or what the guy in back is looking at/jumping over. All the different type fonts and styles makes for a very busy feel. Reply »

Very nice entry author...i like your view,whole image,is filled with brightness and positive energy...and i like to see that in this kind of contests...well done Reply »

Nice typo and very interesting color scheme. watermark of mango clipart (between the jumping people) is not jelling with the entire look & feel. good luck Reply »

@ DanLundberg. Thanks for your helpful suggesstions. I have made bottle normal shape as it was. Removed extra font. Removed jumping people and added another model

@ Gopan, I have removed mango clip from background

Thanks Erathion for your comment.
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This is so much better. The skateboarding kid is consistent with the whimsical logo and cartoon Mango Man, plus being able to see the kid's face is much more involving for us viewers. Reply »

Very cute and naïve entry (among a lot of ethilic entries!) Nice... Reply »

Congrats for the 4th Reply »