Creative idea to depict 'energy' with the 'drink.' "Kabooza" does not match the curve and perspective of the can. The bulb's perspective doesn't match the can's either, alhough that discrepancy is less noticeable. If the arcs are an allusion to atomic energy, I think brighter arcs with more plausible orbital paths circling the body of the can would be more compelling. I think the headline is a bit misleading as there is neither a baby nor fire in the image. Dropping the headline would yield a dramatic, understated (epitomized by the all-lower-case "energy drink", and effective (IMO) message.

I think there are a few things that I would look at improving...
1: The 'Kabooza' on the can needs to wrap around the can
2. The can and overall presentation would come across better if it had a bottom, with a mirror finish reflection.

not entirely convinced about the lightbulb or the title text but it's your vision so...

Yep, wrap the type & give the can a bottom.

It's cool! But I agree with the type and the bottom.

Good work, nice color scheme. Correct the logo issues.

nice

thank you all for your comments and advice ive made a few changes

With this bulb u could use this slogan "the best energy drink in the world,with kabooza ,even nerds get some"......again just a joke author,i like your idea and execution...best of luck

yes, hi hi, with the slogan i had little problem becouse i dont know very well english so i think :the doors: my favorite band..... so erathion you are right

Lovely work - congrats!

Congrats for your first place, Nanaris!

Congrats!!

Congrats! for 1st

congrats,....very nice design......

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thanku all!

Congrats for your 1st place

Congrats!!!!

Congrats for 1st place. Excellent !!

Congrats!!

you left me off the box!!

Very nice -- the chops of the dummies are very clean -- shadow are nice and the milk carton is very well done.

hehehehe.......second to none idea,....would you give me a glass of it....LOLs....

Awesome idea! Very original and brilliant execution of your idea.
My only suggestion would be work on the carton and the graphics on it though.

Spot on entry!

Great idea and well executed. Thanks for adding my name

*slurp* mmmmmm I feel creative, hahaha nice job author! I`m very honored

oh boy... LOL thank you author

Thanks a lot guys for the great comments,this was just a moment of inspiration...And to tell the truth,for all amazing artist that i have privilege to know,here on PXLeyes,1000 cartons of milk would not be enough for all u...So once more,i am so sorry for not putting the names of any great chopper...

good work

Wow! Thank you very very much for adding me!
Like the others said: great idea and execution. I especially like how you arranged the letter cubes and the plain white background works very good too.

Kabooza Milk is for sure the best milk you can find! *make a bit advertisement*
Good luck!

wow thank u for adding me among the best artists on Pxleyes its cool

I knew it,.......must be the 3 best entries,....congrats.......

Lovely work - congrats!

Congrats for your second place, Nebojsa!
Please let me know, where I can buy the milk

Congrats buddy!!

Congrats! friend.

Congrats!!

Wow Congrats

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Congrats my friend.., very well done

Congrats!!!!

Congrats!!

Congrats Nebojsa ! Thanks a lot for adding my name, im touched

Coconut Flavored Brandy?!?!?!?!?! OY!!! (great job author)... it would be so sweet.. OY OY OY

love the colors

cool !!! whats the home delivery charges .....

Very well done, author! It looks real!...

I love the barcode details.

Good mood, I like the use of light. Nator has a good point about the color of "drink" and if you'd remove the last R from "Reserverd", would be nice . Good luck!

I like the Font and the use of Light.

I like the Font and the use of Light.

Lovely with an appropriately refreshing feel. However, UPC bar codes aren't very attractive unless you're a computer, and this one isn't even centered above or (better IMO) as wide as the text under it. I would just delete it. Also, the label seems a tad too flat to be on the outside of the curved bottle.

well done author! Good poster.

superb!!

it is amzing ,good luk

thx all for your comm and suggestions!.....!!!

With bottle like this,its better to be Vodka in it...LOL...just joke author...your entry look like professional advertising...well done

great job, love the the colors and the glow effect under the bottle , gl

Lovely work - congrats!

Congrats for your third place, Genuine!

You're very good on making ads , congrats!!!

Congrats! for 3rd place

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Congrats

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Congrats for the 3rd

thx all.....for your comm and congr...!!!

Congrats!!

Mango Man is kind of cute. Distorting the source bottle was a nice idea, but the end result is a misshapened, asymmetric container with an ill-fitting label [label's horizon line has wrong curvature]. I don't get why the woman is chest-bumping the bottle while her less-energetic clone looks on in shocked amazement or what the guy in back is looking at/jumping over. All the different type fonts and styles makes for a very busy feel.

Very nice entry author...i like your view,whole image,is filled with brightness and positive energy...and i like to see that in this kind of contests...well done

Nice typo and very interesting color scheme. watermark of mango clipart (between the jumping people) is not jelling with the entire look & feel. good luck

@ DanLundberg. Thanks for your helpful suggesstions. I have made bottle normal shape as it was. Removed extra font. Removed jumping people and added another model

@ Gopan, I have removed mango clip from background

Thanks Erathion for your comment.

This is so much better. The skateboarding kid is consistent with the whimsical logo and cartoon Mango Man, plus being able to see the kid's face is much more involving for us viewers.

Very cute and naïve entry (among a lot of ethilic entries!) Nice...

Congrats for the 4th

nicely done -- like the font and the overall look

Good one!

Sexy, tough and good mood! The choice of font for the logo fits with the rest, personally I wouldnt use the emboss but a bit thicker outline so it will look more powerful. Also, I wouldnt put the tagline on top over the logo, give it some more space above (or make it smaller) so that the logo is good visible. Good luck!

Edit: another tiny thing about the background: if you flip the gradient from red (outside) to yellow (middle) it´ll have a more depth feeling (red is warmer/ closer to you, yellow is "colder", further away), just an idea...

Sort the union jack out!

I think the overall impact would be better if the main name didn't have the soft bevel.

Some very good suggestions here, so thank you all. Waz (and JamesD), I changed the emboss from a soft to a hard chisel, and I think nit looks a lot better. Also, I left the outer glow white, but gave it a red stroke to match the "K" on the label, and it too seems more powerful and consistent. As for the tagline going over the logo, I chose to leave that there rather than reduce the size of the two main characters in the ad. A lot of Japanese ads seem to do this kind of thing, almost to the point of being confusing, but that was partially the point - to emulate an ad that didn't quite make it across the ocean intact. that said, the suggestion to flip the background gradient was also a good one. I had red in the center similar to the Japanese "rising sun" flag, but it does indeed get more depth with them reversed. Thanks for the tip, the kudos (particularly the nod from CMYK - he must be getting soft in hi old age ), and rest of the suggestions all.

Very creative and convincing! I would observe that while the logo starts in front of the bottle, it then goes behind the ninja bunny ear, so terminating behind the tag line makes sense. I would delete the border around the 11 o'clock sun ray to make it match all the other rays, however.

Goo work. Name of the brand should be more visible, may be you can change the outline colour or the thickness.

colourful!! good

Better!.... but the UNION JACK!

Great Job!!! Really love the overall effect... GOOD LUCK!

Thanks Slushy...

Very very good...i like humor,i like overall mood and of course i like execution...best of luck author

Thanks erathion. No one's commented on humor yet...the whole piece is supposed to be funny!

Of course it's funny!
I can't read many kanji words, but you wrote "desert" on the bottle, didn't you? And something like "exciting", I suppose...

Excellent entry, however you should have taken the warning about the Union Jack, we`ve invaded for far less lol

LOL nice job I like it

Congrats