4340 comments received ( finished contests only ):
avatar aheman
aheman says:

balloon color to change to match overall color scheme
strings not strong enough to hold balloon, change to ropes?

nice idea

(5 years and 2843 days ago)

To see the world
avatar madamemonty

Congrats Matteo terrific work

(5 years and 2843 days ago)

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avatar Fredex
Fredex says:

Maybe it's just me but the balloon feels a little low compared to the water... I can foresee an imminent and dramatic crash on the horizon...

Oh and on the subject of the balloon and basket being 'out of proportion' I think it probably looks better this way than if they were not scaled down to the baby. Now do feel free to ignore this if it becomes pretentious but a full size basket would give the idea that it was being seen by an adult and that the baby was out of place or intruding for comic effect. Whereas a smaller basket kind of gives the impression that it is being seen by the child, in its own world, and that the basket is specifically for it, not adults. I warned you it would become pretentious...

(5 years and 2843 days ago)

To see the world
avatar pearlie
pearlie says:

Reminds me of the song with the line 'carry moonbeams home in a jar...' - guess it's in the basement while you look for a suitable jar! lol

(5 years and 2843 days ago)

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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

The lighting is too inconsistent and wonky, from the intentional glow edges, which just look like a bad extraction, to the totally black balloon, showing no light refraction/reflection from the strong light source of the sun.

The "shadows" from the totally black balloon lines also look very unrealistic, and not in a good fantasy way.

While an SBS would help the view recognize which poor chopping effects are deliberate, this is still an image that needs work, either to look more realistic, or more fantasy. At present, it just looks very novice, especially for a photoshop competition, IMHO.

(5 years and 2844 days ago)

To see the world
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Might have been easier to make a SBS explaining that, then...??

(5 years and 2844 days ago)

To see the world
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Ballon & basket are out of proportion. Too many white edges on child & balloon.

(5 years and 2844 days ago)

To see the world
avatar fatz8016
fatz8016 says:

nicely done..great creativity also..i think the textures u have here work very well with your image..GL author

(5 years and 2848 days ago)

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avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

If the average brick is 9" wide, this is a 27" moon. Oh wait, these bricks may be as big as 24"...that would make the moon 72".

(5 years and 2849 days ago)

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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Interesting idea, but the inconsistent lighting and side shadows are hurting it, visually.

You have a "glow" around the moon, yet it can't seem to even reach the top or sides of the chamber encasing it...Perhaps if you feathered it out further, it would help appear more as part of its surroundings.

The side vignette shadows from top to bottom just looks like an uneven attempt to shine a dim spotlight down on the scene. If you try toning those down, especially as you descend down the image, you will achieve a much more effective visual movement to your main focal point, the moon.

The moon also looks a bit too black and white for its brick surroundings. Color refraction would impart at least a very slight warm tint (3-5%) to it.

(5 years and 2849 days ago)

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avatar Alan2641
Alan2641 says:

Great choice of images and very nicely blended --- glow on the moon is nice -- one small thing is the edge between the wall image and the soil might look a bit better if the line between then was a bit more defined -- more of a cross section effect (IMHO)

(5 years and 2849 days ago)

Underground
avatar Hayato
Hayato says:

NICE IDEA, Author!!

(5 years and 2849 days ago)

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avatar Glockman
Glockman says:

oh cool , like this one also.

(5 years and 2858 days ago)

The Matrix
avatar Nickk
Nickk says:

Very cool !
GL

(5 years and 2862 days ago)

The Matrix
avatar lordymail
lordymail says:

congrats!

(5 years and 2863 days ago)

Industrial Farming
avatar spaceranger

Congrats!!

(5 years and 2863 days ago)

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avatar hereisanoop

Congrats.... man

(5 years and 2863 days ago)

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avatar bcabilan
bcabilan says:

Congrats!

(5 years and 2864 days ago)

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avatar Chuck
Chuck says:

Congrats

(5 years and 2864 days ago)

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avatar nilknarfsoive

congrats for the 3rd place....

(5 years and 2864 days ago)

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avatar langstrum
langstrum says:

Congrats Matteo !!!

(5 years and 2864 days ago)

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avatar George55
George55 says:

Congrats for third.....!

(5 years and 2864 days ago)

Industrial Farming
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Great work.

(5 years and 2864 days ago)

The Matrix
avatar Chalty669
Chalty669 says:

It's up to you but if it was me I would move the M to the right until I got rid of the little sliver of red. That way the M would take on the edge of the red......If that makes sense.

(5 years and 2864 days ago)

The Matrix
avatar hereisanoop

wonderful entry

(5 years and 2864 days ago)

Industrial Farming
avatar Rod13
Rod13 says:

Very interesting with the whole field on the bun idea. Good Luck Author.

(5 years and 2865 days ago)

Industrial Farming
avatar erathion
erathion says:

Very cool and technically good work but this become a bit boring, trees on the cheeseburgers, umbrellas, turtles, boots, small planets, elephants, books and so on and on. U are great chopper author try to get out from the mood box that u created. Don't get me wrong, i always give high marks to your entry's but would be cool more artistic evolution.

(5 years and 2866 days ago)

Industrial Farming
avatar George55
George55 says:

Good job!.... Good luck!

(5 years and 2866 days ago)

Industrial Farming
avatar kushpatel
kushpatel says:

so milk is free with burger ha..lol great idea

(5 years and 2866 days ago)

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avatar Akassa
Akassa says:

Very nice composition ^.~

(5 years and 2866 days ago)

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avatar enblanco
enblanco says:

Great composition, GL!

(5 years and 2866 days ago)

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avatar lordymail
lordymail says:

the light is very good, but it seems to me that the burger is floating... maybe a little more shadow... the rest is good... good luck

(5 years and 2867 days ago)

Industrial Farming
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

I don't see any industry here...

(5 years and 2867 days ago)

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avatar Drivenslush

oh lord.. hehehehe, great idea

(5 years and 2867 days ago)

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avatar Toothpick134

Great work author! You have a very unique style and I guessed that it would be you :P GL
IMO i would darken the bottom of the burger a bit or somehow soften it because it doesn't look like it's on the ground.. I mean it does look like it is a lot but it could even more I think :P Good luck

(5 years and 2867 days ago)

Industrial Farming
avatar bddesign
bddesign says:

hey, i used that stock for dreams in black and white... woot! http://www.behance.net/gallery/Dreams-in-Black-and-White/287900

(5 years and 2914 days ago)

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avatar Androla
Androla says:

congratulations!!!

(5 years and 2919 days ago)

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avatar spaceranger

Congrats!!

(5 years and 2919 days ago)

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avatar madamemonty

Congrats Matteo beautiful work

(5 years and 2919 days ago)

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avatar nishagandhi

wow congrats Ponti!

(5 years and 2920 days ago)

It
avatar bcabilan
bcabilan says:

A dreamy cool effect. An outstanding work of imagination.. GL author!

(5 years and 2920 days ago)

It
avatar erathion
erathion says:

very very nice work author...before voting high resolution is a must...best of luck

(5 years and 2920 days ago)

It
avatar pixelkid
pixelkid says:

Wish I could see a huge version of this on a wall. Beautifully done, author!

(5 years and 2926 days ago)

It
avatar DanielaOwergoor

Love it!!!!

(5 years and 2926 days ago)

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marina08 says:

I really love it!

(5 years and 2926 days ago)

It
avatar Androla
Androla says:

adore such works!!! instant fav!!!

(5 years and 2927 days ago)

It
avatar Francky
Francky says:

decidedly I like your style ! I'm agree with CMYK46. That's very impressive

(5 years and 2928 days ago)

It
avatar spaceranger

Really nice dramatic lighting, very well crafted!

(5 years and 2928 days ago)

It
avatar Alan2641
Alan2641 says:

great image of the girl -- like the lighting

(5 years and 2928 days ago)

It
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Too dark in the LH corner.

(5 years and 2928 days ago)

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