To see the world - created by ponti55


To see the world
Favs: 0SBS: n/aHi-resRank: 5/18Score: 62.8% (15)9886 views

Thanks to NightFateStock (5 years and 2834 days ago)

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avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Ballon & basket are out of proportion. Too many white edges on child & balloon.

author says:

The white edges were done using the Glowing Edges filter set to screen, they were intentional. As for the proportion i'm very aware of it but it would've made for a boring image if they were.

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Might have been easier to make a SBS explaining that, then...??

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

The lighting is too inconsistent and wonky, from the intentional glow edges, which just look like a bad extraction, to the totally black balloon, showing no light refraction/reflection from the strong light source of the sun.

The "shadows" from the totally black balloon lines also look very unrealistic, and not in a good fantasy way.

While an SBS would help the view recognize which poor chopping effects are deliberate, this is still an image that needs work, either to look more realistic, or more fantasy. At present, it just looks very novice, especially for a photoshop competition, IMHO.

author says:

Glowing edges overlay removed, black lines made thinner, more light added to the balloon and scaled down the child slightly. Thank you.

avatar Fredex
Fredex says:

Maybe it's just me but the balloon feels a little low compared to the water... I can foresee an imminent and dramatic crash on the horizon...

Oh and on the subject of the balloon and basket being 'out of proportion' I think it probably looks better this way than if they were not scaled down to the baby. Now do feel free to ignore this if it becomes pretentious but a full size basket would give the idea that it was being seen by an adult and that the baby was out of place or intruding for comic effect. Whereas a smaller basket kind of gives the impression that it is being seen by the child, in its own world, and that the basket is specifically for it, not adults. I warned you it would become pretentious...

avatar aheman
aheman says:

balloon color to change to match overall color scheme
strings not strong enough to hold balloon, change to ropes?

nice idea

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