maybe make the head more visible?

Changed the opacity of the snake's head to make slightly more visible. Good suggestion.

ok it might look better if you would put the snake's head at the tip of the tongue. What you think ?

i think i liked the first submission better to be honest...

Yikes, simple but very scary!

Pretty sloppy in hi-res. There are artifacts & remnants of the red car all over the place. Doesn't seem like you used the highest res source pic.

thanks, criticism, change color and resolution

Nice effect with the skin texture.

might look a bit better if you hid the texture as it runs over the body seams and edges of the openings

I know I'm kinda late but remove the shadow of the smoke IMO.
Nice job author, Good luck

Good image, extra points for humor!

great take on the theme, love the sign and fire trail. wonderful entry

Kill Bill? good luck