maybe make the head more visible?

Changed the opacity of the snake's head to make slightly more visible. Good suggestion.

ok it might look better if you would put the snake's head at the tip of the tongue. What you think ?

i think i liked the first submission better to be honest...

Yikes, simple but very scary!

This is so well done, and so disturbing looking. Great job!

Wow. Great work! Someone has her piercing in the foot. Has she?

Disgusting, but exceptionally well done!!!!
Awesome!
Good luck, author!

Coooool idea and awesome work!..
high marks author!!! GL

O.o it's very good....and it creeps me out X3 nice done!

Creepily great! Creative blend.

This is funny and wonderfully colored! Really nice work especially the background.

very cool work man good luck

omg, very nice!

The light area behind his head and back don't really look like they belong there. Also, the inconsistant blur on his body doesn't look right.

I think you've illustrated a proverb/adage/saying rather than an American-English idom. That said, if there's tape over his mouth, then we shouldn't be able to see lips, but rather just a straight up-and-down edge.

Thank you for the comments! I will try to fix those as best as I can.

I like this image....

Just try to focus that man more than lens flair... That character is totally merging in background....

good luck

I'd lose the text, and make the tongue blend in to become the knife, not just sit over the handle. I'd probably have chosen a meaner looking pic for the 'tongue' person too but thats minor. Overall nice job, especially with splitting the boy's head

Thank you!

I agree with Ray...

Im find it hard to believe that, the person who split the head and the one who added the knife to the tongue are the same. Good luck author

that's a little twisted