iPhone 28s - created by TheShepherdFromNorth


iPhone 28s
Favs: 4SBS: 6Hi-resRank: 2/6Score: 62.4% (30)10223 views

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avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

You might want to smooth/blur a few hard/ jagged edges.
Author, you need to post each of your photos uncut in a step-by-step guide. (SBS).
5.3. Use of Personal Images as Source: If you use your own personal images, the uncut source must be placed in the step by step with an explanation that it is your image.
Please take time to read http://www.pxleyes.com/guidelines/photoshop/

author says:

Thanks! It has all been fixed by now.

(5 years and 394 days ago)


JamesD says:

I can't see the images in your sbs... just a progression of your work.
you should place each original image uncut as a seperate step, this way it's much clearer.

(5 years and 394 days ago)


author says:

Sure, I will show you as fast I reach my computer, I'm at work you see.

avatar spaceranger

Clean up looks good, nice work overall!

author says:

Thank you so much Spaceranger!!

(5 years and 390 days ago)


avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

Good job author, good luck

author says:

Well thank you very much James, I hope for the best!

(5 years and 393 days ago)


avatar DanLundberg

Clearly Photoshopped per the contest requirements, but I wish I understood the point of the image. The title makes sense without the little you. Alternatively, a little you also reaching for the apple with a new title could be intriguing (and more fun).

Given that the title references the iPhone, it should be crisper to stand out more.

I think replacing the variegated apple with a more-solid-colored red delicious or golden delicious apple would add a smooth texture and a stronger focal point.

The shadows are too strong IMO. The little you has a much more intense shadow than the apple. The slightly vague arm/apple shadow (that inexplicably extends far into the bottom left corner of the image) is way too expansive.



author says:

Thanks! I Well, I did not figured out any good name so it end up with this.. If you have any ideas, please, feel free to share them!

I just did turned up the colors on the apple a bit but I wont do it more then so since it's gonna look to extreme.

Yes, I agree with you that the shadows were looking to strong and therefore I did changes them, how about now?

(5 years and 389 days ago)


avatar UglyBOB
UglyBOB says:

Great take on the theme... I love the abstraction

author says:

It's nice to hear that you like it, Bob, thank you so much!!

(5 years and 390 days ago)


avatar spaceranger

Congrats!!

author says:

Thank you so much!!

(5 years and 384 days ago)


no avatar

congrats .....

author says:

Thank you!

(5 years and 384 days ago)


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