Intriguing and disturbing. I don't get the title or why her green chest hair blends into the neckline of her dress while not extending down to the holes in the dress's front. Not sure what her neck is without an SBS.

I personally liked the original image you posted. I like this one too! You do great work, author...so it doesn't matter which ends up being used. Keep it going!

I decided to change my picture into something more simple and i hope less disturbing !

it's a mirrored face so in the mouth , there is one big tooth (should be an easy fix) good luck

I would like to have seen some SBS. But the image itself is not so bad, on the contrary, it looks nice. Good luck.