fly away - created by Mozzafan07

Votes: 458

Rank: 18/23

Score: 51.8%

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The girl is unhappy as the swan has flown away.

(I also thought I'd try turning a black and white background into a colour one)

hope you like it.

*edit*

I took the comments on board and made a slightly different version.

the swan is more defined and less motion blured.

The girl has more darkness/shadow and the light coming threw the trees making brighter gaps in the shadow.

please let me know what you think.

thanks for all the imput so far.

(2 years and 89 days ago)

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8 Comments

fly, away

CMYK46 says:

I don't see a trace of the PXL source.... Reply »

(2 years and 89 days ago)

author says:

please see SBS Reply »

(2 years and 89 days ago)

CMYK46 says:

Ummm, okaaaay.... Reply »

(2 years and 89 days ago)

Jellopudding says:

I like it, although I do not like the swan, you took your time on the whole picture but the swan seems sort of sloppy ... you should have left source image and had girl watching swan.... I do how ever think the work itself is very nice and very well done, especially adding colour to a black and white photo... Good luck Author Reply »

(2 years and 89 days ago)

ponti55 says:

Not a good use of source.. however i like the background, looks very realistic, and the girl is well blended.. maybe make her a tad darker. Good luck. Reply »

(2 years and 89 days ago)

erikuri says:

Maybe the swan could be a little less blurry... yes, as ponti55 said, the girl a little bit darker. Reply »

(2 years and 88 days ago)

Jellopudding says:

I like the little girl but I think the swan still needs improvement...I think you have done a fantastic job on this piece ..with the exception of the swan x Reply »

(2 years and 87 days ago)

jawshoewhah says:

Extremely minimal use of the source Reply »

(2 years and 81 days ago)

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