Great creativity, well done!

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I thought you were a moderator correct, too bad, I was wrong

and to the author, a great job, congratulations

Congrats Rob wonderful work

Congrats, we'll done!

Congrats (In English)!

Congrats robvdn, well done

Very nice and deserved. Nice week for you!

Thanks for the congrats all!

fantastic (as a miroir sorcier). bravo

Did you get PM for this?

It's a good idea, but I don't understand the light source behind the windows. IMO the original darkness is more effective. Your entry might benefit from a SBS so we understand your thinking.

Surreal or not, the perspective is wonky, with the lampposts being about 4 1/2 feet tall in relation to the door behind them... The lighting is not "surreal," it's nonsensical. Perhaps you do not know what the Surrealism Art movement was all about, but trust when I say it is not to excuse poor Composition.

Surrealism focuses on organic shapes, twisting lines, visual textures and lighting specifically angled and shadowed to help convey a mood, not just lights tossed around with no logical illumination or shadows.

Your lighting of the archway provides no illumination of the ground in front of it, and the midget lampposts do not cast proper illumination of the ground directly below them.

CMYK was being kind in requesting an SBS. Whatever your thought processes, buddy, they are far more "surreal" than the lighting in this entry...

It really shows a lot of promise, but it also shows some glaring continuity issues that "surreal" cannot hide or excuse.

Maybe a little more contrast between the figure and the door. The person gets a little lost. Other than that I really like this work. I love anything surreal, when done well (As you have done here). Great work author, good luck.

nice lighting

Download the photo on the left and manipulate it in any way you want. You did your work, it is your idea, and if is surreal or not, this is the way you wanted to present it. It is good to give constructive criticism or suggestions about an entry. But at least tell the author how he / she can improve their work. Negative comments do not work. Good luck author, you have the talent, and you have your ideas!

Dramatic elements and color palette. In addition to tweaks others have mentioned (except I myself like the bright light behind the windows if it were to illuminate the foreground a tad), I wonder if the moon is a bit too small for maximum drama (plus add three or four stars to the sky?) and if eliminating the left-hand street light would create a more compelling diagonal composition.

It just occurred to me that moving the figure to midground with footsteps in the sand behind him might be evocative.

Wonderful work, very creative and original. I loved it so much my favorit good luck!

The colors and mood are beautiful, but I feel the streetlights are too small. Maybe if you placed them farther back, behind the door... and that would count for the lighting on the windows... just an idea!!

I think this is a great image. Well thought-out. I love the light behind the doors. It's central to the theme here, I believe. Sort of like the light at the end of the tunnel. It's funny, when I first saw this entry a few days ago, I didn't notice the figure. Whatever, if anything you did, it was the right move. Nice work all around. It's obviously art as you've garnered quite a bit of thought from the PXL audience. S. Dahli would be proud. Art is, after all, quite subjective.

elegant, bravo

Very nice and deserved. Nice week for you!

Very cool! Great idea. You beat me to it.

Yowie!!

Great idea of breaking out.....and then some! Nice work.

Clever idea and great work.

wowwwwwwwwwwww.....!!! great man.. good luck

Very nice and deserved. Nice week for you!

I admire your thinking here, and the sepia tone really makes it. GL author.

In case people tend to vote without checking the SBS, do see that first! Quite some good work involved here, well done result! Good luck!

Good job. The building and fence are well constructed. To enhance the old photo effect you could add a vignette.

This is really nice. Great job. Looks like it wasn't even altered. Nice touch with the sepia as well.

great!!!!!!!

Cool....but you know, as I slowly scrolled down, I find that I like the image without the boy and toys. It looks very good just cropped there. Just me.