teeth look a little fake

Would there be a shadow under the blood? I only ask - I don't know the answer!

thats not supoos to be a shadow its a dry blood

Um, seems like you could have probably tried to improve some of it based on suggestions. Disco and Tuckinator made good. Sometimes, keep an open mind to what people critique, because I can tell your probably still just playing with PS. It really could have used a little more work in realism.

There's some potential here. Your SBS doesn't describe the gauzy overlay with the cross [anathema to vampires?], let alone why it's perspective is different from that of the girl. I think the red blood is too bright and thus looks fake. Having her holding a dead baby instead of a doll would be more compelling (disturbing) as would a title that referred to her as a bride.

very cool

i agree with Dan about brightness of the blood,image is scary enough that u don't have to use blood effect at all,its clear that she is vampire.And in this moment something is not OK with the source links...any how i like this image and u how time for some improvements author...good luck

Spooky!

wooooo ! like this !! g l

cool

Not bad, but looks too much like daylight.

She got the sunlight! Nice effects!... But I'd prefer without all those blood, just a little was fine IMO.

Thanks for your comment erikuri. The reason for the amount of blood is that she has just bitten someone.

good luck !!

Cool idea, and post-prandial vampires would seem to be the ultimate in drama IMO. Necertheless, the fried-face portion seems more on top of than into the skin in the eye/nose portion—but maybe that's somewhat of a misread on my part because the smoke edges are just too strong.

well, the blood is very gruesome

A higher res would have been nice.

I personally think cracked texture is better for zombies. GL though!...

i agreee completely with erikuri

Yep the cracked texture is not working for me either, how about old peeling paint that would work,and the addition of some smoke as she is about to turn in to a crispy critter and you will be on the right track.....

Cracking texture IMHO is great touch but demands a bit more work...try to create realistic sunrise and blend texture with some nice gray photo filter...then u will have realistic death of vampire by sun...good luck author...i will hold my vote

Good idea, having the sun fry her, but maybe reduce the cracks and discolor the skin more.

The eyes are good - she looks just as if she has a cateract problem poor girl, but in this case it's just fine!

thank you all for advice, you have helped me a lot
i hope it's better now

Very cool idea, but I think the entire edge of her face directly facing the sun should be cracking—and why not have her hair on that side disintegrating as well?

because i looooooooooove her hair
but thanks for advice of course

I thought something like this ! But maybe you are very better ! good luck

Agrees with the texture about the cracks. So she's committing suicide? Seems rather happy about it. Probably not a good source for a vamp transformation but mainly lacks better details.