incredible work here

Nice effect with the blood, it's very natural. GL!

well done author.. though a little more brightness would be good.. just because my eyes SUCK!!! and it's hard for me to see in dusk.. hehehe.. but if it's okay on your end.. by all means go for it.. It's a pretty cool image

I also see bad in dusk... I'm myopic . It's simple: let's become vampires!

Cool head, Nevertheless,I think Step 5 of your SBS is better (albeit not great). The darkness here merely obscures everything without adding anything. Glowing eyes (and lollipop perhaps) would at least be creepy, and moonlight illuminating the background might add unsettling drama.

@ Slushy and Dan: I hope it's better now; I took off the color layer, and on step 5 I added pale blue lighting effect (omni) almost behind boy's head. It turned image a bit dark and with a kind of moonlight behind.

well, really cool job on those ears author! love em'

is it some kind of cherry blood lollipop?...LOL...very nice author...gl

that is so cute! love it! good luck

Nice image very pretty young lady...I personally think that you don’t need the bite marks they are not really adding anything to the image. The simplicity of the image is the key and the eyes have a massive impact on the viewer, portrait pose eye contact...

Nice touch...

The expression isn't very vampish...

i like this image a lot, maybe change the color of the eye to like a red or something

agrees with CMYK. It just looks like a portrait with the fang, blood and bite marks.

Whoa, the baby has a bat nose!
It needs a slight shading between hat and head.

Background is too dark. At first glance the kid is missing the top of his head, and the wings don't stand out. IMO real wings would work better.

Oupss..
I forgot to shade it I'll shade it now.

to CMYK: 1-Yes the background looks darker when I uploaded it.
On P.S it wasn't dark. (I'll fix it)
2- I can't understand the part of the missing head
3- IMO I like these wings

Ohhh about the wings I don't want it to be wings I want it to look like if he's wearing it (Type of cloth)

Yes I know, I just called them wings because that's what they are in your source pic. Don't you think the hat is a bit too small and too dark compared to the source? The background is better now.

Yes you are right.
I've adjusted the size of the hat in Photoshop, used burn dodge tool and then used the liquify tool
I forgot to mention it in the SBS.

Very disturbing, but appropriately so. The head is outstanding, but I'm guessing the little notch on the left side is an extraction error and not a deformity. Quibbles: I appreciate that the hat and collar are just kitschy add-ons, but I think the bottom edge of the hat should either be a totally straight line or else curved at both sides (not curved on one side and straight on the other). [BTW choosing two curved sides would also suggest some curve in the middle would be appropriate to convey a further hint of realism.] Finally, a Victorian picture frame around it all accompanied by a title such as "Our Little Darling" would convey a more complete and compelling story IMO.

nice idea...good job on the ears but the vampire needs a body

Wowwwww Thanks a lot for the suggestions I really appreciate it
I'm working now on the image and I'll update it soon.
Any other suggestions are welcome.

Updated hope it is better now.
Waiting for other suggestions

I like this surreal kid vampire...good luck author...

wow, very different now cool

Thanks everyone

great!

Awesome! The assymetric hat (top edge and brim) really adds character. (More contrast between the two frame levels might be warranted, however.)

Done

I think you were probably taking on a more artistic approach so I can understand the distortion and so I don't think it really matters in this case so GL.