forgot no pre-built mesh .. so I removed the flowers..

The floor grain on the RH side is a wee bit too sharp, and that light reflection a wee bit too bright (the table would show a LARGE light refraction spot if the light source were that bright), but otherwise, this is a beautifully rich and elegant image. VERY nice work!

Wow, mines a guinness
EDIT: This is absolutely fantastic, I think you should get another ashtray on the small table with some beermats and a couple of half drunk straight beer glasses. Maybe a little bit of litter on the floor.

Very nice model but I would like to see with out such harsh lighting

Professional Job! It really remembers a place where we can play pool.

Hrm, as an ex removal man I have shifted a few pools tables before. I can say that those tiny little legs would in no way hold up the table. Even if they were solid steel then the floor would be dented in very much.

That is my only criticism however since this is excellent work!

author...your first mesage sounds like that: ''forgot no pre-built mesh .. so I removed the flowers..''....and me, I say that: remove the phone...maybe it's in the same catgory with flowers.....)...btw...how do you made the phone....? I want to learn to make myself one...)...or maybe not......)

PS
work is good ... maybe rendering is wrong!

Hay genuine2009 it might be considered pre-built since I made it for another pxleyes contest which included and SBS. After the contest over my name should show up and you can go look at my gallery which include the link to the SBS of the phone.

Ory you are right . I did not noticed, late night render and all. The table should be about 2 inch lower that part on top of floor should have been sunk into it to the first pad area. I will fix it. other then that IMHO the table is a approximation of a Victorian style pool table. Which have those small legs

WOOOOw

Very convincing render, congrats! I'm not a fan of the smoke though, but I know it's tough to make it real.

Perfect render...

Great work the whole room is very well built

Congrats for your first place!

Congratulations for 1st, great render.

Nice Job Congrats on First Place Win

Congrats, wonderful work

wow this is amazing!!! congrats!

Thank you every one for the Vote Now I will see what i can do since i discovered BREAK .. now I don't have to chamfer all those edges.. and Finally wrote a Normal plugin for my version of Carrara

Nice job

Excellent work here author, GL

Fantastic design, very realistic, great job.

thanks for the comments and votes

Great piece of work author...well done

Congrats for your second place!

Congratulations for 2nd

Congrats

Great model, fab job.

The closeup shows a distinctive RH tilt on the table...Even allowing for "camera distortion, the slate will still be level with the back of the image. Anyone who's ever bent down to line up a shot will testify to that...

The texturing and color around the table edges is exquisite. Just level the slate.

Great job..attention to detail has really paid off. GL

Thanks for the comments guys. MossyB I assure you it is all level. Must just be a trick of the eye.

this is really good work, but I think the hightlights on the balls need work.... Have you ever been to a place where the balls have beaten up? by that I mean, a lot of people hit the all the balls with overly welll chalked cues, which leaves marks on the balls. If you could add those and work a little bit with the highlights - This would be Awesome, not just really good!


pm if you would like some more info on what I'm talking about

The pool table is nice. The balls are simply fantastic, very realistic! Nice texture and reflections!

A beaut.

Very very nice work author...GL

Congrats for your third place!

Congratulations for 3rd great job

Congrats

Great work author, GL

Hey this is really good. I have never used any 3d programs what so ever, but I do play pool at least 5 times a week. the shadows and highlights don't seem right to me... other wise this is great! I may use it as a desktop image if that is ok with you?....

it is okay with me ...

P.S. i have never played pool before

Author Gud work done but there is a major defect..as u said that u never played pool before so its obvius that u wud not know abt it....
In pool board the pockets don't protrude out like that..the way u have made it...the pockets should be aligned with the corner beams....the faulty positioning of the corner pockets are not so visible but the middle pockets are not supposed to be like that...have a look at some of the pool board images on the internet...u will sure figure it out what i am supposed to mean...gud luck friend...god bless you

great work...GL

nice 3d effects..,

Fantastic work author...table look fantastic...i like usage of glass material so much...best of luck

nice one -- a bit tough to apply "English" to a table of glass (LOL)