153 comments received ( finished contests only ):
avatar JannaR
JannaR says:

The textures and soft light are lovely, but the image seems a bit blurry to me. Also, a vertical shot would have been better.

(5 years and 1334 days ago)

monday.
avatar JannaR
JannaR says:

The colors and lighting are beautiful.... but I agree with Friiskiwi, about being more eye level with children and small subjects. But because of this angle, it may have been better for a Wednesday, or Thursday child. Also, a closer crop, or vertical shot would have been better.

(5 years and 1334 days ago)

Saturday
avatar Chrys Rizzo

Dear Author, the name of the entry should have a day of the week name... Monday, Thuerday and so on..

(5 years and 1339 days ago)

Saturday
avatar Chrys Rizzo

Dear Author, the name of the entry should have a day of the week name... Monday, Thuerday and so on... and in the case of your photo, I (ok, my humble opinion) crop a little bit in the right and left side and give a little bit less contrast...GL

(5 years and 1339 days ago)

monday.
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Cute photo, but you need to consider how you crop your photo. With small children it is often a good idea to get down on to their level. Also see if you can get a better quality out of your camera.
Goal states; Put the day in your description. So decide which day this child fits into.

(5 years and 1339 days ago)

Saturday
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Cute photo, but you need to consider how you crop your photo. also see if you can get a better quality out of your camera.
Also, goal states; Put the day in your description. So decide which day this child fits into.

(5 years and 1339 days ago)

monday.
avatar wazowski
wazowski says:

Funny image, author. You do need to pay a bit more attention to the masking of the objects, but the imagination is ok! Good luck!

(5 years and 1363 days ago)

gum express
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

The concept and overall composition of this is very nice. But the too bright background jumbles everything together and overpowers the gumdrop trees. Distance (*even imaginary types) is often conveyed by a graying effect, as red and yellow tones are more short light waves. If you were to slightly desaturate that background with a gradient adjustment layer, and possibly increase the color saturation of the gumdrop trees just a bit to help them "pop" a bit more, your "candyscape" will have a much better visual presence. As is, if you squint your eyes slightly to blur the entire image, you will see that is a somewhat amorphous blob needing a more distinct focal point.

(5 years and 1365 days ago)

candy world
avatar trialboj
trialboj says:

I don't really think that your class is thick like this. In my opinion, if I explain your problems, and give some advices how to make better, you learn more, as if I make a comment like above, about how good is.

So I explain why isn't correct this scene, and you should remember my advises in the future.

The main problem is that everything is thick, this could be adjusted easily, just have to notice it.

The second problem is the sharp of the edges, use chamfer tool on every edges that are too close to camera.

Use texture on models, CGTtextures is full of textures of all the genres, and it's free. Nearly every texture has at least a minimal reflection, don't forget this, your floor will be much more realistic with a blurry reflection, under the right window.

Best wishes.

(5 years and 1368 days ago)

my school
avatar trialboj
trialboj says:

You should use some reflections on the materials, the models are quite simple, but it's quite ok.

(5 years and 1368 days ago)

class room
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maozbd says:

much better now! good luck

(5 years and 1368 days ago)

class room
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maozbd says:

good entry maybe consider to add a little bit of color cause there's a little bit to much wood/ but excellent work anyway!

(5 years and 1369 days ago)

class room
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

(5 years and 1369 days ago)

gum express
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Author, entries are supposed to be anonymous.

(5 years and 1370 days ago)

gum express
avatar paudiyal
paudiyal says:

Nice!

(5 years and 1370 days ago)

my school
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

This week one of the contests is 'Wild animals'

(5 years and 1371 days ago)

my pet :)
avatar friiskiwi
friiskiwi says:

Sweet, bet you now wish you had saved it for next week

(5 years and 1371 days ago)

my pet :)
avatar rahul.savalia26

Good One..

(5 years and 1374 days ago)

my school
avatar lchappell
lchappell says:

Nice job

(5 years and 1374 days ago)

my school
avatar wazowski
wazowski says:

Pretty funny idea . Good luck!

(5 years and 1377 days ago)

wild race
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Can't see the hat. Try to remove the lines around the ring.

(5 years and 1384 days ago)

Scary
avatar lincemiope

hairy man, always liked it! Italian proverb!

(5 years and 1567 days ago)

cow boy!
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Might be more effective if you took out the human hair behind the cow head. GL author.

(5 years and 1573 days ago)

cow boy!
avatar spaceranger
Moderator says:

Your entry was moved back into the contest by a moderator.

(5 years and 1748 days ago)

dont do that
avatar bjaockx
bjaockx says:

interesting interpretation... since this is an attempted lifelike scene i will mention a few points on that. The girl with the guns is shadowed as if the light source is on the ground. everyone else is lit from above. both people with guns are missing proper blending and shadowing on the ground to make them appear to be standing in the grass. all figures appear to be flat and just pasted on. and i am not really sure how this is painted to look like an Egyptian style. perhaps view the example given. good luck!

(5 years and 1749 days ago)

dont do that
avatar Rumi
Rumi says:

not bad, try more subdivisions, the water edge looks jagged and also put some noise and use some bump or displacement in the texture both water and the rocks .what software is it by the way because i cant tell there is no sbs, gl

(5 years and 1753 days ago)

Water drops
avatar jordyponce

Nice image author!
try to blend a little more the cute boy,with the rest of image
some color balance..would help.

(5 years and 1813 days ago)

KID
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Don't use ALL CAPS...it's considered shouting, and rude. And text speak isn't so great either.

(5 years and 1816 days ago)

KID
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Don't use the magic wand for selections, use the pen tool or lasso tool. You have plenty of time to clean this up and resubmit.

(5 years and 1818 days ago)

KID
avatar ciulama
ciulama says:

finally u got it right this time. Good luck!

(5 years and 1819 days ago)

the train
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Much improved from what you originally uploaded. Listening to the critiques offered will often help you improve your entry, so don't take them as an attack, take them in the spirit they are offered, which is to help you.

(5 years and 1820 days ago)

the train
avatar ciulama
ciulama says:

man go to Flickr.com find a train and replace the one in your drawing, http://www.pxleyes.com/blog/2009/06/how-and-where-to-find-legal-source-images/

(5 years and 1820 days ago)

the train
avatar ciulama
ciulama says:

u changed train source but u didn't changed the train )

(5 years and 1821 days ago)

the train
avatar aheman
aheman says:

the bridge n train's perspective not right, improve on the contrast, now alittle flat (not much tonal changes)

(5 years and 1823 days ago)

the train
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Author, the kind of feedback I gave you should be very useful.

(5 years and 1823 days ago)

the train
avatar Eladine
Eladine says:

Author you should try change the angle of the train, it looks like its placed wron.. if u turn the angle further hes about to fall of if you turn it the other way then u may get it straight. Also I would make the train smaller so it would fit on the edge of the wall. Pehaps you will be able to create your own trackes with just drawing lines and plank images. I like the black n white setting u have made here, also where does the grass/plants, the sky and the moon sources come from? I dont see them listed. If you created them yourself please do show in your step by step

(5 years and 1823 days ago)

the train
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Even if the train were at the correct angle, it's wider than the aqueduct, and there are no tracks...

(5 years and 1824 days ago)

the train
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prem says:

LOL unique style good job

(5 years and 1825 days ago)

DISCO BALL AT KITCHEN
avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

If they were all sliver and reflective, this would be a great take on the theme, but having them colored with those strange artificial colors doesn't make this look like a disco ball, just a bunch of utensils...

(5 years and 1825 days ago)

DISCO BALL AT KITCHEN