the train - created by pikkar


the train
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(5 years and 2687 days ago)

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avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Even if the train were at the correct angle, it's wider than the aqueduct, and there are no tracks...

author says:

i tried but i wasnt able to add tracks

author says:

pls make USEFULL commentS,

avatar Eladine
Eladine says:

Author you should try change the angle of the train, it looks like its placed wron.. if u turn the angle further hes about to fall of if you turn it the other way then u may get it straight. Also I would make the train smaller so it would fit on the edge of the wall. Pehaps you will be able to create your own trackes with just drawing lines and plank images. I like the black n white setting u have made here, also where does the grass/plants, the sky and the moon sources come from? I dont see them listed. If you created them yourself please do show in your step by step

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Author, the kind of feedback I gave you should be very useful.

avatar aheman
aheman says:

the bridge n train's perspective not right, improve on the contrast, now alittle flat (not much tonal changes)

author says:

not u CMYK there was sm1 else cmnted, sorry

author says:

i used brush for the moon and stars, i dnt remember the site, was long ago. search u ll find it...

author says:

except the train and brdg evrything else is brush

author says:

VE DONE WITH THE SOURCE URL, IS THERE ANOTHER PROBLEM?

avatar ciulama
ciulama says:

u changed train source but u didn't changed the train )

avatar ciulama
ciulama says:

man go to Flickr.com find a train and replace the one in your drawing, http://www.pxleyes.com/blog/2009/06/how-and-where-to-find-legal-source-images/

author says:

is there any prblm now?

author says:

thanks for d link

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

Much improved from what you originally uploaded. Listening to the critiques offered will often help you improve your entry, so don't take them as an attack, take them in the spirit they are offered, which is to help you.

avatar ciulama
ciulama says:

finally u got it right this time. Good luck!

author says:

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