(5 years and 461 days ago)
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(5 years and 2392 days ago)
It's too dark, with too much background. Your focal point is lost as just a small shadow on the horizon line. There is no way to visually determine if it is wrath or just aggravation at not being able to find his car keys that he's dropped in the dark...
I would suggest a heavy crop, making your subject much more dominant in the image, and accenting whatever it is you feel is conveying wrath, which is a strong and vengeful anger, like rage.
And I would add that the masking of the man needs some refining: his arms and shoulders are sharp and boxy, not natural, yet the edges of his pants are over-blurred. Overall, I like your choice of character and what I can see in the high resolution, but without more light contrast, the drama is "overshadowed" so to speak.
too dark, the figure is hard to make out......... i don't feel wrath when i look at it.
(5 years and 2395 days ago)
great anger in eyes.....
Bright a little the pupil to create a more attractive point, well done.
will do, thanks Akassa, i knew something was wrong, but i couldn't figure it out!
Friends hope u like this work of mine.....there is always a scope for improvement...so any suggestions will b greatly appreciated...!! thank you all... (5 years and 2742 days ago)
Great perspective here!! His scarf on his head might have more contrast. It's almost the same color as the platforms on the mast which are really up high. But it's quite a nice composition. GL
Change the pair of sneakers to a pair of boots; he must look like a pirate from old times, not a modern one.
I love the image overall, but the sneakers and scarf need to be fixed to make this a contender. I'll hold my vote for now and see what you can come up with.
thanks a lot artgirl, erikuri and raytedwell for ur precious suggestions.........i tried my best to keep up to ur expectations and ended up with this...i removed the scarf and substituted it with a pirates hat ( own source thanks to my bro) and to substitute the sneakers as the high boots were not going well with the 3 quarters so i covered it full and added the boots( own source thanks to my neighbour)..!! hope you like it
Changes have made the world of difference. Top job
Incorporated two personal images for the contest. (5 years and 2993 days ago)
nice colours. you need to link to your OWN personal images. Check guidelines. i think you need to upload your images into your own photo album on Pxleyes site. GL
Just include it in your SBS if it is one of your own or link the sources if they are not.
Thanks for the comments, If you bothered to look at the sbs ,,,personal pictures are the first two steps, as mentioned on the main pic.
has a nice outcome to it goodluck author
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