wrath - created by Se7eN0f9


wrath
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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

It's too dark, with too much background. Your focal point is lost as just a small shadow on the horizon line. There is no way to visually determine if it is wrath or just aggravation at not being able to find his car keys that he's dropped in the dark...

I would suggest a heavy crop, making your subject much more dominant in the image, and accenting whatever it is you feel is conveying wrath, which is a strong and vengeful anger, like rage.

avatar elemare
elemare says:

And I would add that the masking of the man needs some refining: his arms and shoulders are sharp and boxy, not natural, yet the edges of his pants are over-blurred. Overall, I like your choice of character and what I can see in the high resolution, but without more light contrast, the drama is "overshadowed" so to speak.

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Keiley22 says:

too dark, the figure is hard to make out......... i don't feel wrath when i look at it.

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