(5 years and 1807 days ago)
isn't it ?!
but still I think it would be better to position it in a more stable pose...
I like the part you used hair as the heart ( I think thats heart but I am not pretty sure !)
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(5 years and 1848 days ago)
very manga wanga tanga
Outstanding! Great reconfiguring of features and recoloring. I do find the (awful lot of!) sparkles too flat/same plane because they're all the same size, however.
Thanks for the feedback!
I made some changes..
The eye on the right (as viewed) is misshapen rather than round in the iris area and the side edge by the head. But a nice source image to work with.
thanks to marcus ranum
muttstock,FantasyStock (5 years and 1862 days ago)
Good work! Try to cut the white parts in the girls leg and will be perfect! GL !
Is something holding that sword, or is it sticking through her left arm?
(5 years and 1899 days ago)
thanks to auroradreams
sacral-stock,nightfatestock (5 years and 1957 days ago)
Mask work of the woman is too sharp and angular as though you used the polygonal lasso. There are several tint shape layers on the figure which make no sense as though they are off register. The straight right side of the tree where the image ends makes it obvious it's pasted on, you could fix that with some careful cloning, the tree shouldn't be so sharp either it should match the softness of the rest of the image at that distance. The moon should be softer as well. I think you could improve your entry if you would work on these basic problems.
I think the dark shadow from the hill to the ground needs to be more gradual/subtle. AS it sits now, I think it's too powerful and takes away from the image. I also agree with spaceranger's comments. Good luck. I will hold my vote in case you decide to make changes.
It a nice entry, I see were you going with this, if your going to re-edit the image, don't forget to put the moon behind the clouds. Cause the moon is in space, not in the atmosphere.
hope this is better
The woman fits better. Maybe use the burn tool to give her a cast shadow and also darken the left side of her body since the light source is coming from the top right. When you are making the cast shadow keep in mind where the light source is coming from. Keep working on it and you'll have a cleaner image. Good luck!
is that better
The concept and the composing of the image is very nice, but some things are wrong.First, low the contrast of the moon adding some blur on it. Moreover I think there's too much light on the girl and on the track she's running on, thinking about the moon should be the only source of light she should not be so shiny. Things will change if a car is behind her! Sincerely, i would modify a lot of things, but I don't know where to start from.
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