Very realistic work author...i like gray scale choice...gl

She was so serene...
Author, there's a flaw in the dark side of her "jaw"; I particulary prefer natural proportions, but... GL!

Thanks for your comment erikuri but that really is of know help “flaw in the dark side of her "jaw";

What is the flaw, too big, too small, not in line, not dark enougth ect ect i can't fix it if you don't tell me what it is........

you should fix the slight bump in her jaw (below her ear),..i think its what throws off the proportion a bit. otherwise good job!

nice job!

Really good job.....but her one fang is on a different tooth than the other one. gl

Made a few changes……

Many thanks for your comment Krystain, but I think this is a pretty accurate interpretation of what the face would be like if the face was elongated/deformed like this.

Many thanks for the comment gejopo, but I was unable to move the tooth back, as there is just not enough room to fit it in my chosen outside sources.

I welcome all comments good bad and the ugly, but I would like to point out that if you can see any details in the dark side of the face which is jet black. Then at best guess you monitor needs to be re-calibrated. I do this sort of work and 3D modeling on a freelance basis I can not afford for my screen to be incorrect.

Whether the face is supposed to look like that in a vampire (although I don't think there's a specific vampire design guide to ad-hear to) but the mouse contrast is not looking good. I think in this particular design, color would have been a better choice, IMO.

Great blending of the parts, author. And that is one heckofa fang!

great entry, GL

Your source 2 needs permission for use out of DA....plenty of time to get it or change model, would be a shame to get this pulled. Well done author

Nice out side source like what you have done with her hair!! Could do with a little work still, shadows on the slug should be softer,edges are to hard at the moment. And there is a very visible line that runs across her chin that needs to be removed.

sharp eye Warlock, hope thats better

Very well done, author! I've seen this tut before, and I think you followed it perfectly. GL!...

OMG, that's horrible - fantastic work, author! LOL, hope you get your images worked out. I think you achieved your goal in step 8.

Nice job! Fix the shadow of the slug...the lighting is from above.

Thanks for the advice "CMYK46" i was unsure as to weather the shadow would be as i have it or at a 90 degree angle the tongue ... non the less i made an edit taking in your advice

hahhahah cool1

creative

sweet!.... nice job on the color.

very creative, one of the best, gud luck

Very nice and creative =)

very similar with this: http://effects.worth1000.com/entries/282750/lust. But I think that 2 different person could have the same idea... sometimes...

ye this is because it was the tutorial that inspired me, sorry i must of deleted it when i updated my description part

Beautifull

Very nice use of source! Great job.

love it...nice composition ,shadow and light....

Very good, amazing combination. Surely a great idea and result.

Thank you for your kind words. The Valentine is coming and I'm far away from my girl. We even don't have any photo, so I created that for her as my gift. I wish I have a chance to take a photo like this.

Beautiful work......Great use of the source....

Ok, this is the best way Ive seen the source being chopped so far...Great work author!!! GL

Very very nice.....

Very beautiful and romantic scene... I'd like to be there!

fantastic

This has a beautiful feel to it, well done!

This is definitely the winner. Congrats in advance!

looks good

congrats

Congrats for your first place, Langstrum!

Congrats!

Congratulations for 1st, nice

Thank you very much for your congrats. I fell great because this is the best gift I can make for my gf this Valentine

Yay!!! congratulations on 1st palce!!!! Great image!!!!

aww thats sweet

Simple but I really like this. Recommend streching the shadow a bit. I don't think a shadow at that angle would have the same perspective as the object casting it.

I did change the perspective a bit. . but I was reluctant to overdo it because I was afraid that the couple's silhouette might get unrecognizable. . .

Like it GL

i like it! nice job

simple, but effective. love the idea!I also love kisses