great entry, GL

Your source 2 needs permission for use out of DA....plenty of time to get it or change model, would be a shame to get this pulled. Well done author

Nice out side source like what you have done with her hair!! Could do with a little work still, shadows on the slug should be softer,edges are to hard at the moment. And there is a very visible line that runs across her chin that needs to be removed.

sharp eye Warlock, hope thats better

Very well done, author! I've seen this tut before, and I think you followed it perfectly. GL!...

OMG, that's horrible - fantastic work, author! LOL, hope you get your images worked out. I think you achieved your goal in step 8.

Nice job! Fix the shadow of the slug...the lighting is from above.

Thanks for the advice "CMYK46" i was unsure as to weather the shadow would be as i have it or at a 90 degree angle the tongue ... non the less i made an edit taking in your advice

hahhahah cool1

creative

sweet!.... nice job on the color.

very creative, one of the best, gud luck

Very nice and creative =)

very similar with this: http://effects.worth1000.com/entries/282750/lust. But I think that 2 different person could have the same idea... sometimes...

ye this is because it was the tutorial that inspired me, sorry i must of deleted it when i updated my description part