great entry, GL Reply »

Your source 2 needs permission for use out of DA....plenty of time to get it or change model, would be a shame to get this pulled. Well done author Reply »

Nice out side source like what you have done with her hair!! Could do with a little work still, shadows on the slug should be softer,edges are to hard at the moment. And there is a very visible line that runs across her chin that needs to be removed. Reply »

sharp eye Warlock, hope thats better Reply »

Very well done, author! I've seen this tut before, and I think you followed it perfectly. GL!... Reply »

OMG, that's horrible - fantastic work, author! LOL, hope you get your images worked out. I think you achieved your goal in step 8.
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Nice job! Fix the shadow of the slug...the lighting is from above. Reply »

Thanks for the advice "CMYK46" i was unsure as to weather the shadow would be as i have it or at a 90 degree angle the tongue ... non the less i made an edit taking in your advice Reply »

hahhahah cool1 Reply »

creative Reply »

sweet!.... nice job on the color. Reply »

very creative, one of the best, gud luck Reply »

Very nice and creative =) Reply »

very similar with this: http://effects.worth1000.com/entries/282750/lust. But I think that 2 different person could have the same idea... sometimes... Reply »

ye this is because it was the tutorial that inspired me, sorry i must of deleted it when i updated my description part Reply »