(5 years and 1713 days ago)
Where did the bullet stop?
Your source pic has the fruits arranged along a diagonal line so your bullet is only piercing the pear which is not that obvious from your image (much too much pear-entry debris), plus the pear-exit debris is clearly not all originating from the exit point. A crisper bullet (with less crisp reflection) would also be more convincing (without the path-blur behind it).
I would like to propose this as an example, the bullet portrayed here was not intended to be a pellet.
this is nice.. GL author
the big thing to me is that the bullet is off perspective and off the path of the holes made... drawing a line through it gave me an up ward trajectory which then means you should have the bullet slightly above the apple... also far too much entry debris and imo, a bit too much exit as well... but just slightly so ;] good work on the exit debris though looks pretty good. GL!
THANK YOU NATOR
bjaockx, I totally disagree with you' when I draw a line through the holes I created the projectile is in the correct place,besides most always a bullet will start to tumble when it strikes its target or an object. As for the debris well that is no BB shot and please take a look at some of these as examples http://iniwoo.net/inspiration/amazing-high-speed-photography/
good work and good luck
looks great good luck
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i used the source image to create the background, comet and stars (in quik mask mode with star brushes). i am waiting for suggestions. (5 years and 1880 days ago)
personally i think everything here could have been done better with out the use of the source
a little more use of the source in the comets (maybe the grass or the leather thing) could add to the effect
it s your opinion and i respect it, but you could say something useful .
nice job author..though a SBS would be helpful (I can see the jeans quite clear in the HIGH RES but a lot of Newbies would probably benefit from a step by step...especially how you merged the texture of the jeans into the texture/comet.. (showing how you used the star brushes would be a cool TUT!!!! ) It's a very nice image overall.. and the work is very well done.. .. GOOD LUCK
thank you a lot golemAura, i will make a sbs tomorow.
Golem is right........SBS would be helpful in order form opinion. waiting to vote til then.
I can see a lot of the jeans pattern in the HR.
very cool image author!
just a suggest, maybe it's better if the result more bright....
sorry for the lately sbs, i was very busy this week.
I like this image. Sorry i have no real feedback for you author except nice use of source.
nice idea maybe a bit much on the bigger stars I do like the comet good luck Author
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