Is it a 5 liters beer? IMO, it should be shrunk a little bit and maybe blended better with the environment. Burning some light on the right side of the beer can could enhance it. Just a suggestion. Good luck author

Kept the Ale can the size to match the graffiti behind the Murder Hole sign (though I did convert it from 14oz to 12oz shape which is much more common size to my eyes.) The lighting ratio looks okay in my eyes so I'll just keep it the way it is (did dodge the light side of can just a touch as per your suggestion) thanks

Love the colors!! Good luck author!!

Great concept, but the perspective angle of the swing is too skewed for the angle of the arch. Either the kid needs to be more face forward, or the arch needs to be angled.

Sources are not usable. Please read http://www.pxleyes.com/blog/2009/06/how-and-where-to-find-legal-source-images/

@Mossy i had trouble with that becuase i could not figure out which way it was faced. the two bases of the arch are the same width and obviously the sun is coming from the right. but i could not figure out the angle of the arch. i tried my best though. :/ haha

@CMYK thank you very much for nothing that.!!! i have fixed it. appreciate the care

You might want to consider a different swing source. Here are a few:
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=60368
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=3910555
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=3910505
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=4775508
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=4226660
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=4852980


(You'll have do do a little chain work, 'tho...)

Author, these sources are still not usable. Please read http://www.pxleyes.com/blog/2009/06/how-and-where-to-find-legal-source-images/

CMYK NOW i have fixed the problem, i apologize I'm very new to this site and I am still feeling it out!! I thank you for your time

Great rework! Don't worry, it gets easier with every contest you enter!

Author, you finally got it right...good luck to you!

Thanks CMYK hahaha.. im just new to PXLeyes so im still getting used to it. sorry for the inconveniences. !!

mmmm, i knew it was you

Hmm... your title is probably right. Violence breeds violence...

ummm cool...