This was better before. Now you've "Burnt" the left hand side, which makes the decoration on the lower part of the eye look odd and out of place. A bit too extreme of a value adjustment. "Less is more."

The marks on the bottom look really saturated. Great skin coloring.

Mossyb I'll try to do what you suggested ..

Oh thanks AKassa ...

This looks so dreamy like! I love the tone and how you decorated the eye!
One thing I see and it might be wrong, if you put less flowers on the lower part of the eye? But all in all is great!

I have lighten some areas I hope it look better now?!.......

Well thank you so much JoeCacia .....About less the flowers!! amm it was my idea to make them like that when I first start to create this ...I don't know if I less them maybe it will be out of what I want it to be..

Now when lighting it up it looked much better and I can see your work! Wonderful author!

the work on skin and the eye itself is very good, but the interlaced decoration under the eye does not really belong there, here is a reference for the face decoration in case you want to improve:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/31078888@N03/4349125398/
good job overall and good luck


EDIT: .... It surely not a disaster if you leave it as it is, after all it's still a good piece of art, i was just trying to help

Hey thanks for the advice I appreciate it,amm i think that am gonna leave it just like it's,it's really okay if I didn't win after all...it's not the end of the world haha

Very Good!! GL