Too dark, color should extend above eyelid.

It was meant to be that dark,"gothic style"..
im gonna try to fix the color part.

The flesh of the eyeball itself looks black...Interesting concept, but the execution looks rushed, without attention to detail with the color just slapped on.

I dont think this was rushed?..thats a bit diferent,..I can call it simple edit, playing with effects..
about the slapped color..there's not a lot of room to play and extend the color..
I tried what I saw was right for my eyes..if mess with color too much,
then it would look like a clown..maybe u are right in the eyeball part..
Thanks for commenting!!.

I love it! ♥, I think I will go with this make up from now on

JoeCacia lol,I think u will look pretty on pink..

Thank you so much author!

I love it! I think the color is great!

I would shade a little more the pupil to give the imagine a bigger dynamic. Very nice idea.

Thanks for all comments!
and thank u Akassa im gonna work on all suggestions.

Fixed the color above eyelid,some dodge tool to give brightness to the eye,.. and shaded a tiny bit the pupil..thanks all for the suggestions.

innovative...

Too blurry..But good peace of thinking.