"CraZy Train - created by YFZBOB


"CraZy Train
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My 2nd attempt using my tablet. New to PS too...
Basically lots of layers and brush work done. (5 years and 2666 days ago)

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avatar DanLundberg

Interesting idea, but the smoke and steam don't look realistic. And out-of-bounds images are more compelling if the OOB element is more substantially out of the photo frame. Scrunch the left photo edge so the white frame seems to be parallel to the front of the train engine.

avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

Nice effort. But I agree that smoke and steam are cartoonish. Try to make them using clouds render filter, resizing and removing the excess with soft eraser. In the case of smoke, you change the color. It's an idea, GL!

author says:

Thanks for the input. =-) I'm stumbling along on PS. But I'm getting it. I'll work on the recommendations listed.

avatar Tuckinator

very nice idea!

avatar oasisman
oasisman says:

smoke looks much better now. Well done. New to PS? Have you used other tools in the past then because your work is a high standard for a beginner. Good Luck.

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Where are the train tracks?

avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

I was thinking the same thing, CMYK.

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