Punishment - created by debdyutsarker


Punishment
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It's really a punishment to live without you...

Note: I've only used one of my own picture which I'm giving in step by step guide... (5 years and 3260 days ago)

avatar kakarot
kakarot says:

It's a bit sad because of too much dark but its great !

avatar DanLundberg

Not clear where the light on the figure is coming from. (Windows could not light his face and they would create a shadow angling away, not towards, the windows.)

avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

IMO man's shadow is a bit sharp, comparing to wall's shadow... and needs more perspective, considering lighting source. But it's a good idea!

author says:

thank you all for your valued suggestion. I've changed some details, e.g. I added some more light to the man, I correct the sharpness of the shadow etc. But as the man is siting close to the window so the shadow will be not too much bigger, you can see the beam shadow. When I took this pic I used the same angle for the light as the window. But I changed something more for your suggestion. Thanks again. Your correction or suggestion is always a lesson to me. So please feel free to give comment.

avatar DanLundberg

I think this is better. I'm willing to accept light on the model's face on the side toward the viewer (opposite from the light of the window) as a necessary artistic decision, but I wish his shadow were more realistically to the right so we only see three quarters or maybe just a half of it. I don't know what the bulge shadow half-way up the right-side wall is, but I would clone it out because it's distracting.

avatar itsdesign
itsdesign says:

nice mood

avatar sweetrumki

Ahha !! sad sad mood !! but nice work author ..

avatar Geexman
Geexman says:

I love the mood on this, not sure about the amount of blur on the background compared to the model, yet it does make him the focal point which may have been the intention, nice entry

author says:

thank you all...

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