Elisewin - created by Dallaclya


Elisewin
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Years ago a very special friend give me two gifts: one book, and a Cd.
A book from my favourite author and a song from my favourite group.
He told me “When you read the book, you have to listen the song. You will understand..”
The name of the Book is “Ocean Sea” (Oceanomare) written by Alessandro Baricco and the title of the song is “Elisewin” by Ashram.
This song is dedicated to Elisewin one of the character in the book, a beautiful young daughter of a local aristocrat, who's been stricken with a mysterious illness.

This is my favourite song, discovered in a special moment of my life. I still have the book and I can’t read it without listening the violin play..

This is colourless day of my life
Won't you sweep it away
There are fog and rain in your eyes
May I sweep you away

There is incredible cold in my life
Won't you sweep it away
There are millions of pearls in your eyes
May I sweep you away

Elisewin

What is happiness, sadness, life
Won't you sweep it away
Where are calm and shine of the sky
May it sweep us away

Elisewin

Thanks to:
Faestock on DA
Lucieg-stock on DA
The-strawberry-tree on DA
Tasosanton on Stock.xchng

I do my best but to improve suggestions or comments will be very appreciated..

Song can be listened here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8SeEkqEJL74 (2 years and 313 days ago)


avatar hsbee
hsbee says:

aaaaahh.. very beautiful song.. thanks for the link author.. about ur image, great work here.. but u could add more shadows.. for eg, at the edge of her right calf, u need to add shadows to blend with the env.. , at her feet u need more shadows because there is too much difference in lighting bw her feet and the ground she has her feet on, that it appears that her feet are floating.. just play with the shadows and blend her well with the env.. gl

edit: my apologies author .. 'bw' was between and 'eg' referred to example.. hope u had a really fun time translating my comment Reply »


(2 years and 313 days ago)
author says:

Aaaahh.. I really love translate English! lol So, if I understand: “env” it’s environment but what about “for eg”? lol Thaks for suggestion, I’ve made shadows a little bit bigger, changing opacity.. what about now? I’m still not really convinced but I will try to change others details afert work, thank you so much! Reply »


(2 years and 313 days ago)
no avatar

Nice song and nice picturisation... Reply »


(2 years and 313 days ago)
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Nice job blending the background images...to me, her colors seem too bright for the lighting, but good work over all. Reply »


(2 years and 313 days ago)
avatar pixelkid
pixelkid says:

A conflict of lighting, but it IS a beautiful image and very nice interpretation. Reply »


(2 years and 313 days ago)
avatar sosipatra
sosipatra says:

beautiful Reply »


(2 years and 313 days ago)
avatar TemporaNigra

Deduco tu sia italiana...Gli Ashram sono molto carini, l'opera anche ma la poesia che c'è nel tuo racconto trovo sia la cosa migliore! Davvero dolcissimo. P.S. Vinciiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Reply »


(2 years and 312 days ago)
avatar Andershegelund

Very beautifull.. You should make the colors of the instrument and the girl more blue i think Gretay job! Reply »


(2 years and 312 days ago)
avatar Tuckinator

nice Reply »


(2 years and 311 days ago)
no avatar
AprilDawn says:

This is very pretty! Reply »


(2 years and 311 days ago)
avatar magicsteve

Your lighting looks a bit off on the girl, but other than that this is great work. Love the emotion you get from looking at it. Nice job! Reply »


(2 years and 311 days ago)


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