Remove this. - created by vinshine


Remove this.
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mods., Remove this.,

Even i don like this one ., so removing it., :D
(5 years and 3136 days ago)

avatar GolemAura
GolemAura says:

oooookayyyyy .. err umm Author.. slowly back away from all the sharp objects in the room..slowly.... slowly... no sudden moves LOL..

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Gives new meaning to

avatar Tuckinator

good add

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isur says:

good luck

avatar gopankarichal

good marketing idea

avatar magicsteve

While I applaud your originality and apparently great knowledge of puns I must say that there are quite a few issues with this piece that could be improved upon. For one, the hammer's perspective is a bit off (the way you have it makes everything above the onions appear to be in the background and not on the burger). The white confetti banners at the top of the screen are a bit odd as well. I would either lose them or add more with different colors/shapes. Also, your typography at the bottom of the screen needs some improvement. The font choice is wrong for an "ad" and the grammar is quite...

avatar magicsteve

...bad. I would rewrite it so it read more like this: "Call 911 and say "I Killed Adam" to get your free burger today!" There really is no need for three exclamation marks at the end of any sentence. Also, put "911" in red instead of green as red is a color of intensity and emergency. Other than that, the words "Just Free!!!" confuse me a bit. If you are trying to create a special giveaway for this product I would phrase it differently so that it was easier to understand (just the word "Free" would even suffice). All in all I think you have a lot of potential with this entry if you choose

avatar magicsteve

to give it another look. But whatever you do, don't give up! Every comp you do will get better and better and you'll eventually realize that what you are making is really incredible. All the best!

avatar fille
fille says:

i'm sad i didn't saw this...

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