Really nice,
maybe try to work on the connection of the feet with the cake some more.

GL! Reply »

Reply:

I agree on the feet, otherwise, excellent idea!! Nice work! Reply »

Reply:

I worked a bit on the feet, they seem immersed on the cake now. Thanks for the feedback. Reply »

Reply:

one for the favs.. cant go past chockie Reply »

Reply:

yes, you did a great job fixing the feet,
now its wonderful! Reply »

Reply:

Thanks a lot for the support and feedback! Reply »

Reply:

Reply »

Reply:

Congrats Akassa nice work Reply »

Reply:

Congrats!! I'm really glad this won you did a great job!! Reply »

Reply:

congrats, nice work
Reply »

Reply:

CONGRATS! Reply »

Reply:

Very creative colorful simulation, I can see the hills/mountains and 'natives' in their 'papooses'. Reply »

Reply:

Reply »

Reply:

Nice scrumptious scene, well designed, author. Reply »

Reply:

the mountains are those giant confections you get from the Cuban bakery markets here in southern Florida.. ugh.. I could eat 10 in a sitting with LOADS of butter LOL... more color variation would have been a route of experimentation, but it wouldn't stop me from nibbling on the road LOL.. good luck Reply »

Reply:

Thank you both!! I did thought about the colors but I couldn't think of a suitable green to go with bread and coffee... maybe the celery of a Bloody Mary... Reply »

Reply:

It's so dark and monochromatic, you can neither make out the differences between all the sources you used, nor appreciate the wide variety of different items creating the foodscape.
Carl Warner lets the food be the landscape, not hide it behind overly dark values. Perhaps lighten it up and allow some of the real color to show. Reply »

Reply:

do u think that step 9 will be ok?
Reply »

Reply:

step Nine is much nicer then the dark version for being able to see the actual food.. IMHO

EDIT: Much Improved!!! Reply »

Reply:

Thanks a lot Drivenslush!, I'll change it
Reply »

Reply:

I would drop the pizza, and I would go back to step 9, desaturate and colorize a little bit. If you blur the farther away parts and the farthest even more, it'll give it some depth. Also, in an actual landscape, the farther hills and mountains are from the camera, the gradually lighter and duller they look. Check out this picture you'll see what i mean

http://www.redbubble.com/people/natureshues/art/2059066-blue-mountains-sunset

I think you have the pieces and everything for a great entry, just needs a little tweaking hope this was helpful, best of luck!

Reply »

Reply:

Changed it, hope it's better now!
Reply »

Reply:

WOW! What a difference that made! MUCH much better, I'm glad I waited to vote. High score from me, you've done a wonderful job! Reply »

Reply:

YAY! Absolutely great! What an awesome improvement! You take suggestion extremely well Reply »

Reply:

Thanks for your comments
Reply »

Reply: