Join Pizza's World - created by theodosiou


Join Pizzas World
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(5 years and 952 days ago)

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avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

It's so dark and monochromatic, you can neither make out the differences between all the sources you used, nor appreciate the wide variety of different items creating the foodscape.
Carl Warner lets the food be the landscape, not hide it behind overly dark values. Perhaps lighten it up and allow some of the real color to show.

author says:

do u think that step 9 will be ok?

avatar Drivenslush

step Nine is much nicer then the dark version for being able to see the actual food.. IMHO

EDIT: Much Improved!!!

author says:

Thanks a lot Drivenslush!, I'll change it

avatar Robart523
Robart523 says:

I would drop the pizza, and I would go back to step 9, desaturate and colorize a little bit. If you blur the farther away parts and the farthest even more, it'll give it some depth. Also, in an actual landscape, the farther hills and mountains are from the camera, the gradually lighter and duller they look. Check out this picture you'll see what i mean

http://www.redbubble.com/people/natureshues/art/2059066-blue-mountains-sunset

I think you have the pieces and everything for a great entry, just needs a little tweaking hope this was helpful, best of luck!

author says:

Changed it, hope it's better now!

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

WOW! What a difference that made! MUCH much better, I'm glad I waited to vote. High score from me, you've done a wonderful job!

avatar Robart523
Robart523 says:

YAY! Absolutely great! What an awesome improvement! You take suggestion extremely well

author says:

Thanks for your comments

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