Nice job on the girl and overall it looks good. I'd question the light on the near side of the bike though. Nice work

Good Lord...this picture is disturbing beyond compare. O.O

Thanks, I aim to please

Lol, well I don't particularily like the image, but you've done a fair job. Two of my most imminent complains I suppose are that the staircase looks like it's hovering, rather than flat on the ground (the shadow is a bit thick at the front), and that the floating woman doesn't seem to match the lighting and sharpness as the rest of the image. Try playing around with curves a bit and see if it can be remidied. Good luck, author.

Okies, i'll see what I can do wiht the stair, but the girl has a motion blur on pupose

Good idea, very dramatic. The snake in shadow is more distinct than the one that's lit...left one needs more contrast/saturation. To me it seems like less of the wall at left would be in shadow, judging from the light source. The left arm of the girl in foreground is distorted. You didn't show how you made the opening in the wall. There, is that enough nitpicking? I still like your basic concept, author, just give it a few tweaks. (y0

I love details and this has many. I would have liked both snakes to have the same contrast though.

You should have thanked PKVstock source 5 and chamberstock source 1 at deviant Art for the use of their images. Make sure you credit authors when it's required. It's really best to always credit source authors, it's a nice gesture and you'll never miss a required credit. Also don't use the download URL for your links, use the link to the page with the image information and the image. That way we can see more of that authors work as well. The correct link for image 3 is: http://stocked-n-loaded.deviantart.com/art/Halloween-07-3-68700616

God , that's really creepy !

Thanks for the tip Spaceranger, If you look at my other entries you will see that I always thank.

Needs the blending work as already suggested, not a bad effort though

Interesting entry......GL!

cool idea

No, it's not cool... it's freezing!!!
Now you can't edit the work anymore; but I think you forgot the reflection of the stairs (and nobody noticed it...) Don't forget it next time, my friend!

Nice image.. the water looks a bit odd, but good otherwise.

Great view indeed, well done

Pretty interesting!...

This would be a lot nicer if you have a line of surface, and what I mean by that is that when there is any sort of body of water, there is a waterline, and you don't have one. that differential would make all the difference in this.

A canoe-limo dropped them off, it will be back by dinner time!

Good luck with this entry!

Nice idea, but the water reflection is too clear and rigid. It looks more like a mirror than water.

Hey Thanks. Your right I changed it. How's This!

I think gamemastertips is quite right. The reflection still looks too uniform and mechanical.

No, but I think it may be much better now. However, the frontmost section of the water looks quite odd...like it may have been distored a tad much. I'd also suggest making the water a bit murky, possibly by making a slightly transparent overlay blend of the original water texture. Not sure how this would look, but you could give it a try.

EDIT: I'd go with what blindscientist is saying.

The ripples are cool, but usually water ripples in response to motion of an object in the water - in this case the swans. The ripples shown tend to suggest that the motion might be coming from something else in the water somewhere out of the frame (perhaps a person or boat causing the waves). My only suggestion would be to smooth the ripples out a bit (soften them), and perhaps add small "ring" ripples emanating from each swan that is moving. Just a thought. Good luck!

My only suggestion would be to find a higher resolution source picture. When in full view you can really tell the source image is pixilated.

Remember to link to the exact image page that shows the image and information about that image. It's best to always credit the author of the source...it's polite and insures you won't miss giving credit when it's required. the correct URL is: http://mjranum-stock.deviantart.com/art/Barbarian-Warrior-2-57798186 image author is mjranum-stock. In the future be sure to do this yourself.