you aperture is WAY to open, you need to close down so more than just the wheel of the car is in focus, the lighting and scenery are nice, but you can't see much of the subject clearly

I disagree completely with dem90, the dof is great on this one. I like how the focus falls off at the back. The only thing that I would say should be different is that I think this would benefit from a bit more fill light on the front.

Thanks Locks, I was after this effect, but arguing with negative critics sounds too much like complaining. I was hoping other members would see it different.