unfortunately, the big black vertical makes it hard to follow the leading lines, even with the arrow. It's very dominant, visually, and the short handrail, while echoing the leading lines, contributes more to the visual "hemmed in, stop!" feeing.

A tighter crop cleans up this image. I still like the monorail cab that initiates the line direction. Better ?

A tighter crop cleans up this image. I still like the monorail cab that points to the line direction as well as the railing because it parallels the leading line. Thanks for your comments MossyB.

Nice composition. The lines lead to the ocean, but the rocks bring the eye back to the bottom to travel up again...Good job!

Nice work, green might just be a little over-saturated.

Thank you - I de-yellowed the green a bit

that does look a little more natural.

it's that colour in real life and what made me take the photo in the first place. There's similar mossy type of stuff too on the rocks near the water.

The light reflections on the roof do a wonderful job of accentuating the flowers in front of them. Very nice photo!

Love the lines and the silhouettes, but personally I would have liked a little more contrast.

thanks mossyb, and friiskiwi, I maxed out the contrast on this photo. I could reload it and increase the contrast, but I think that is going overboard.

fair call,

Just now caught the updated image...You should've PM'd me, I would have removed my comment sooner...I was confused seeing the update!

This is a good photo, as the man on the camel really brings balance to the composition and brings the eye back down after the lines lead it to the top. Well done!

another great pic author good luck