Don't put the text IN the picture.. it lessens the effect put it in a frame around the image if you want but it's already in the title.. clean the lines around the eye area.. it will conform the idea.. but other then that..you've got a great work here (cleaning the dirt was the biggest job and you did that brilliantly)

Very n9ice, but i think you've made her too bright, your image is starting to loose detail, like around the nose. i would also try to make the lips a bit larger, they look a bit thin. Good luck though, you did a very nice job!

Edit: ahh, i'd also remove the text from the image, the title speaks for itself