Very n9ice, but i think you've made her too bright, your image is starting to loose detail, like around the nose. i would also try to make the lips a bit larger, they look a bit thin. Good luck though, you did a very nice job!

Edit: ahh, i'd also remove the text from the image, the title speaks for itself

Don't put the text IN the picture.. it lessens the effect put it in a frame around the image if you want but it's already in the title.. clean the lines around the eye area.. it will conform the idea.. but other then that..you've got a great work here (cleaning the dirt was the biggest job and you did that brilliantly)

YIKES you got a double attack from PONTI and me at the same time.. sorry about that... (we are just trying to help..your overall image is very good) I'm cuter then ponti.. hehehe.. he's only 15 and I'm 42.. so that makes me the big guy LOL.. but he's right as well.. you have a great chop on your hands... and plenty of time.. refine and make it AWESOME.. you have the talent.. use it)

And i think that i can do it more good , i will start now to make bit changes. Thanks for coments and suggestions.

big hugs and smooches author.. and good sportmanship is a gem LOL

ponti.. giggle snort

Cuter than ponti? DREAM ON BUDDY!! You may be older, but i feel like the adult compared to you! xD

Hey, I'm cuter than them both and I'm some where in the middle as far as age. So I'm going to tell you to use a soft round brush at about 40% opacity to bring through the eyes from the background layer. Bring the eyes through a little bit at a time this way. I think that this should eliminate the choppiness around the eyes.

Sweet. You may want to fix the visible rectangle around her left eye (and well, I also think that the text is a bit distracting ). Good luck!

looks like a chunk of her nose around the nostril is missing. her right part.

I'd fix the right eye.. it's higher than the left one.. it gives a weird effect to the face..

i dont mind the text but i would of let the text glow more like the girl... in her face next to ther right eye (for the viewer ) i can spot a clear line