very nice ! good luck

I would've likee to see the white level on the paper a bit higher and maybe a photo filter to pull it all together. Good luck!

IMHO this is not OOB image,this is hand that write through empty frames...any how,good luck author

the perspective of the frame that is nearest is wrong but other than that, cool image!

Pen point is in sharp focus, so the writing under it would be too...

Erathion is right; you need at least masking between frames and behind the small one to make the image look like OOB. Flip the big frame horizontally too, as Tucker said. A different color of background inside the frames will make the difference! GL!...

Thanks for all the feedback, CMYK46, I can't really do anything about the writing - it's as it was, so perhaps I should blur the nib of the pen a little? erikuri, will try your suggestion and see what it looks like - thanks!

try adding a white background tp the frame on right side, n as far as the pen is considered try blurring the tip of the pen , its a good entry, gud luck author!

Blurred as suggested by lots of folks! Thanks

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