Chionophiles - created by ajzaib47


Chionophiles
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(4 years and 289 days ago)

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avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Could just be a big rock...we can't see if it's floating or not.

author says:

I hope its better now, thanks for feedback

(4 years and 288 days ago)


avatar Zizounai
Zizounai says:

Very well done, it looks well like an island now! You should just erase the cutting tracks left around the dancer. They are very visible in high res.

avatar BWR
BWR says:

Is the monk secretly in love with the ballerina? Or is he spying on her to learn some moves for the Shaolin Ball? Perhaps she is trying to "woo" the monk with her beautiful dance..

A few suggestions. The bottom of the barn is not blended in well with that snow. Quick and easy fix would be to clone some snow on top of the barn. Just "dab" with a soft round brush to to make high-ish and low-ish points so it's not just a straight line.

That blue in her skirt-thing is distracting. A quick fix would be to Clip a Hue/Sat Layer and adjust the "Lightness" of either the Blues and/or Cyans to make them more white. After that, make sure the Adjustment Layer's Mask is all Black to hide what you just did. Then paint white on the mask where the blue yucky stuff is. Now it's all gone. Also as Zizounai said, there is a bunch of residue garbage all around the girl. It shows up when you are zoomed in.

In my opinion her skin is too warm so you may want to give it more of a blue tint to reflect the "Coolness" of the snow scene. Perhaps a Cooling Filter, masked only to her skin, would be easiest or however you see fit. There is too much black under her foot, and when you cut her out you missed a nice chunk between her knees.

Besides that, it's a pretty cool fantasy scene.

avatar PixelWhisperer

nice idea... different to the norm, WD ,,, would've scored higher if it didn't have the telltale 'cut-and-paste' look, try softening/feathering the edges of your montage elements (just by a few pixel) you'll be surprised the difference! Pix xx

avatar BWR
BWR says:

Good work ajzaib47. Nice chop. Voting was weird on this contest.

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