IMO would be much better with the original background. This one just distracts.

I thought about, give me two minutes

No quibbles about the fun and convincing hair coloring, but the still-brown tresses seem odd to me. The Rule of Thirds would suggest cropping out much of the empty top portion of the image and a bit of the left side. I do find the background bland (with the model blending into it). I think a stark/dramatic ivory background or an out-of-focus environment where this look would shine would give this more oomph.

will have another play with it this arvo thanks for feedback CMYK and Dan