Fix the angle between hook & rope (should be straight, given the pull on it) and you've got a good image!
BTW: Great sick humor!

well done.. and ew ew ew ew ew ew ew

Since the shark is bitting her already (blood on the shark's mouth) the teeth should be on her flesh or then ehr flesh should have some markings. Good luck.

I didn't want this picture to be too bloody, i prefer the humour on it !!

tisk , tisk, tisk,, SO BAD! BUT! someone had to do it... . Just fix the line from the hook as already posted and IMO,what about a litttle shading inside the mouth and on the body to make it look more "INSIDE" ?

I fixed the shading inside the month and on the girl body and work on the hook Hope it's better now ? thanks for your comments

wow... that is imagination...humorous ok, and not too bloody. Good luck!

You "fixed" rope in the wrong direction. The rope and hook should be parallel.

whose at the other end of the line? hmmmm.... her ex?

CMYK46, i fixed the rope !