Well done on the lips but it's a little bit blurry on the left, try to fix that ! However nice job on the skin color. Good luck author.

i dont think the plumping of the lips was necessary, it doesn't look as natural, good job on the color though

The eyes are a bit too bright and unnatural looking, and the nostril fold is a bit too thin, but I agree that the skin tones are very nice.

Doesn't look as natural compared to what? The original Caucasian? I looked at several pictures of pure black African women (not mixed race blacks) to determine the differences between Caucasian and Negroid features before making the changes I did. A criticism of the jaw angle would be appropriate - I don't feel I have that quite right; it doesn't protrude enough.

Mossy, I thought of you as I dealt with the eyes! I actually toned them down and "grayed" the whites from the original, believe it or not. They are not brightened in any way. Just darkening the skin made the eyes pop. I'll try to over compensate some more.

Very beautiful! Truly lovely work! I love this color a lot on her!

Nice job here, the color of skin and hair is very convincing,The eyes look fine to me...best part next to the lips, good job on those BTW.

Great job, author, especially on her lips.