lost - created by Se7eN0f9


lost
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The moon is made with elliptical tool, render clouds, outer glow, the sky filled with black, addn noise, lowered with levels (5 years and 2285 days ago)

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avatar arca
arca says:

Lovely image ... the only thing, IMO ... I think there would be more yellow toned light cast from the lamp on her face and dress (especially since her dress is white). There might also be some light hitting her from the glass door. Also, the door would probably cast light on the ground in front of it and on the planter. Just a thought ... nice work though!

EDIT: MUCH BETTER! Great work!

author says:

ok arca thx for ur comment, made the adjustments u mentioned, hope it looks better now

avatar elemare
elemare says:

It looks AWESOME. I'm not particularly fond of the noise around the moon and in the sky - I think stars can be rendered more effectively another way. Arca's suggestions and your improvements make this top-notch. SBS?

Update: Sky looks so much nicer without the noise.

author says:

u were right elemare, bout the noise, changed the sky to black and painted som starts, noise around the moon is gone now

avatar DanLundberg

Nice combination of romantic and spooky. I think a brighter moon and young woman would add more drama and create a stronger focus. If the moon is the primary light source, this side of the central chimney and balcony walkway should be in shadow and should cast shadows. You haven't provided a source for the moon which has a distracting edge glow.

author says:

thx for ur comment Dan, but imo a brighter moon would distract from the rest, and an even younger woman? This one is in imo bout 25, seems young enough for me> And bout the source for the moon; i made it myself and told that in the description box

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