Parachute - created by nanaris


Parachute
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(5 years and 1351 days ago)

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avatar EmiK
EmiK says:

Very cool, what a great idea about the jellyfish = )

avatar Androla
Androla says:

very creative! good luck!

author says:

Thank you Androla and Emik !

avatar greymval
greymval says:

Awesome idea with the jellyfish as parachutes for the fish, nice chromatics and mood, as well.
I'm not a fan of:
1. Background. No idea if it's an aquarium or the ocean. In the first one you would have some form of "back" of the BG, like an outside word ( you could have made this look like a bubble/ bubble tank, enhancing your composition ). In the ocean, the floor would go further away losing itself in a blurred underwater horizon, or if it's the edge of an abyss you would see the other edge or some seamountains etc.

2. Fish. You only have 2 species repeated a few times with minor hue & scale change, even bubbles on them are the same -makes this very boring. Try using more species and more numbers, maybe a cluster in the background, one very close in the foreground, in order to create More Depth & variety. ( they can also be partially outside the screen.

3. Shadow cast. a) It should be a little more oblique since light comes more from the left, than from the front. b) Dress & umbrella would create a projected ellipse shadow, not a triangle. ( credits for this info: CMYK & his comment on my entry on mushroom shadows).

I wanna make sure that you know: I do appreciate your effort & idea, and I'm only commenting cause I see lots of potential in this entry. With some more time investment it would truly be outstanding.

author says:

Thank you Nator!
Grey thank you for your help , I will see If I will change something!

avatar hazem
hazem says:

i love it ,good luck

avatar woodztockr

This is so, Lil Bo peep, lol, where are the sheep, love this entry!

avatar RichieMB
RichieMB says:

Congrats for 3rd

avatar bcabilan
bcabilan says:

Congrats for the 3rd!

author says:

thank you!

avatar Chuck
Chuck says:

Congrats

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