i think his left leg is too long

Too dark overall. A lot of the empty black on the left could be cropped off to give this a better composition, and increasing the contrast (or the ambient lighting) would better define the "child." Since the title is "Children of the NIght," I thought it was two poorly illuminated figures until I saw the foot on the left...

thank mossyB - I did change the lighting some, and cropped it some. strange how it looks a lot better before saving it as a .jpg


edit - after looking at this I should have put a lot more work into this before posting it in this contest....

I really like this ... I think what you did after Mossy's comment must have helped as I can see it clearly! It has a simple elegance to it and I think you should be happy with the final image. It is unique and clever! High marks for your individual approach!

Thanks arca - I did spend a lot more time on this after those frist comments

I didn't see it before, but totally agree with Arca, it's quite unique, I like it!