Before and after diet - created by lespaul11


Before and after diet
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(soft pop music in the background)
Are you a horse?
Do you have a few extra pounds you need to lose?
You tried everything and no results?
Don't worry Sexy Horse diet pills will help you to get the great body you always wanted.With just 39,99 $ you get one + one FREE bottle.If you call us now you 'll get a FREE pair of horseshoes. (5 years and 1414 days ago)

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avatar Drivenslush

Cute Idea author... one suggestion would be to put all the text in white and use BLACK STROKE 3 - 10 PXLs (see what effect it has on the drop shadow) the split color doesn't work on the 80 pound text) Also try to keep all the fonts at the same size... (Before and After should be the same size as the font on the right... (Unless you are offering information text boxes.. like in a newspaper.. then the font would have to be shrunk to look like newspaper text) ... also center the text on the bottle and sphereize it vertical so it wraps around the bottle (adding a nice label shape oval etc.. is always fun..

You have a great base and I'm sure more peeps will be along to help more, I'm just giving you some suggestions to start.. great IDEA!!! good luck

EDIT: MUCH IMPROVED.. can only get better!!!

author says:

Thanks Drivenslush.I think it looks better now.

avatar spaceranger

Funny idea and nice fix. Good tips from Drivenslush. My only suggestion is to bring the label down just a little and it should curve a bit to match the bottle shape. Love the before image... looks like a horsapottomus!

avatar MossyB
MossyB says:

The "testimonial" should not cover the body of the horse. You have a lot of "empty space" with the sky.

I lost 80 pounds, and I
................feel better than
....................ever
...................before!
(the dots are the horse outline)

would be a more "dynamic" text placement.

Also, the "Before" and "After" should be placed better on top of each image, not straddling them and the background

author says:

Thanks for the tips spaceranger and MossyB. I appreciate that you helped.
Oh and horsapottomus describes perfectly and funny the before image.

avatar spaceranger

Nice refinements, looks really good!

avatar rakib888
rakib888 says:

=))..awesome

avatar bompy
bompy says:

lol good idea made me lauph. good job

author says:

Oh wow. lots of nice comments.
Thank you people

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dnftrader says:

funny, good job

avatar arca
arca says:

Great idea and nice improvements ... it is a wonderful concept. Your creativity and willingness to learn is impressive. Bravo!!!

avatar CorneliaMladenova

avatar JPDesigns
JPDesigns says:

Lol great humor! I love your description! haha

avatar erathion
erathion says:

funny...gl

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