idea is fine -- execution needs some touch up -- all the holes need to have depth as was done in the "P" -- edges should not be straight lines as I doubt that stone would weather to a straight edge

Hey Thanks Alan2641 I did some touch up on what you said any better?

Author the touch-ups are still not quite right IMO, the edges are still too sharp and/or straight. You can try using the eraser with less opacity and fill adjustments. I would use it set at 10% and 10% so you can control it better. Good luck author

good thinking

Creative idea, but the letters need a lot more shadows on their under [ground-facing] sides. I would also consider moving the young adults to the left edge (with probably a horizontal flip and maybe having the kids in front slightly overlapping so the people form a single element) for a more-diagonal composition instead of having all the elements on the right-hand side.

Thanks all I did some readjustments but I maybe should have stayed away from the stone letters

cool idea...gl