Picnic - created by maryabitawi


Picnic
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(5 years and 3782 days ago)

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avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

As you can see in the original source, the shadow under the bread is darker and more defined. Try to put a shadow like that...

author says:

thank youu i tried with the darker shadow but my idea was "old picture taken outside"

avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

So, it's a picnic, not table...

avatar Lamantine
Lamantine says:

avatar Govindrathod

Nice try.....

avatar PixelWhisperer

Nice chop, but would score higher if you'd included some stains, tears, creases etc. to give a really authentic aged look, also you've missed out the baguette's shadow, and you would be able to see the pattern of the cloth through the glass

avatar wazowski
wazowski says:

The mood is ok, but I think you'd see some of the cloth through the glasses. Apart from that, you may want to play a bit with the transform tool to change the perspective of the cloth (imo you'd look more from the side to the cloth, according to the glasses' perspective). Good luck!

avatar dollmommy
dollmommy says:

I agree with the others suggestions but it is still a nice entry. Good Luck!

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