The Pioneer - created by fezjez


The Pioneer
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I'm trying out a lot of new ideas here. My first space scene, my first go at creating a space craft from scratch, and first go at trying to work with 2 separate light sources. As always, all comments welcome. (5 years and 2636 days ago)

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

The things at the ends of the wings are at a funny angle...maybe make them round insteas of rectangular, and parts of the wings look transparent...over all, nice job.

avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

Yes, I agree with CMYK... In the way it is, space craft aerodynamics will be harmed...

author says:

Thanks for the comments. Blurred edges were actually radial blur on a separate layer to suggest movement, but you're quite right, they just look a bit messy, so I have removed. I have tidied up the shapes on the ends of the wings, but may completely redo them as they still do not look perfect.

avatar erathion
erathion says:

nice work...u did good job with a sky and aircraft...but ground don't fit 100%,try to use some overlay and color layers...good luck

avatar mxlove
mxlove says:

I think this is really great

avatar Suky04
Suky04 says:

nice work!

author says:

Just a couple of minor adjustments for anyone who hasn't yet voted. Shapes on wingtips changed, as suggested by CMYK and minor adjustments to horizon/space blend.

avatar Martrex
Martrex says:

Nice idea!! ; )

avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Definitely high vote fom me after changes...great imagination and execution. Good luck!

avatar CorneliaMladenova

Great!

avatar RichieMB
RichieMB says:

Congrats for 2nd

avatar sophia
sophia says:

congrats

avatar loopyluv
loopyluv says:

Congrats on 2nd!

avatar chakra1985

Congrats!

author says:

Thanks to all who commented & voted!!

avatar Lelaina
Lelaina says:

Congrats for your second place, Fezjez!

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