flames arent so convincing, fireman isnt very blended, and the girl's colour doesnt fit in, but i like the idea
EDIT: The flames are much better, and the girls fits better! , very good Reply »

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thanks for your advice! I went back through it and fixed it Reply »

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Hi author - nice idea but im guessing the opacity on the fireman layer is too low as I can see right through his body to the bricks on the wall. The ladder also seems ghostly. Good entry though! Reply »

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thanks..ill i have to fix those!!! Reply »

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Did you notice the smoke forms a figure of a head??? Reply »

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WOW!! i didnt even notice that...very interesting lol Reply »

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If I were you I'd make the smoke less see-though and I wouldn't blur the flames so much. You can also use a light effect (filter-render-lightning effect) and you can make a few shadows. Anyway good luck author !! Reply »

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Not only the smoke has a head-shape, but on the window over the girl I can see a face with a pair of white eyes... Imagination or fact? It's getting scary! Reply »

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WoW..maybe my building is the haunted one!!!!!!! lol Reply »

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Lol erikuri you are right ! this entrie is becoming pretty scary :P! Reply »

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Flames looks unnatural...look at bottom edges of the flame...how metal fence could burn,i think that was first version was way better...try to fix entry,have a potential.... Reply »

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