nice work on the face quite natural -- A bit of work on the neck would finish this nicely Reply »

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Thnx for pointing that out Alan - I did a small amount of work on her neck now - hope its better! Reply »

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nice result overall, very well done. however something is wrong with or around the eyes. They look like they are too small but I believe what is missing is some sort of shadow below the eyes. It looks flat now Reply »

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I added some shadowing with the burn tool under the eyes Reply »

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Nice job, author...if you try and use channel mixer...you can swap out the data of the channel causing that modled artifact look....with a channel that has better smooth shape. Just a thought. Try it! Reply »

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Very nice work !! Reply »

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There's something still with the eye on the right that doesn't look correct like cock-eyed a little or smaller than the other but looking at your original I see it's about the same. Good blend on the face. Reply »

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make eyes bigger! Reply »

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you removed too much from the eyes.. they look kinda freaky now. (i can't stress that enough) Reply »

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think you worked too muh on the eyes, but a nice image overall.gl Reply »

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Kind of dissapointing, been busy and when I finally got the chance to fix the eyes the deadline was over now I can't edit my submission Reply »

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need more work Reply »

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dont worry about running out of time author it happens to the rest of us. You did a good job with your entry. just take on board the feedback and use it on your next entry.. Reply »

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It's still one of the better entries, even without the edits to the eyes. GL. Reply »

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very nice Reply »

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