It looks more like you turned her into a mannequin than a younger version. I'm not sure what tools you used because you didn't list them in your SBS. I would suggest adding some more detail to the eyes and lips because they look so “drawn on”. Perhaps someone else might have a suggestion or technique that would help.

I made some changes and i think now it's better and she is not like a mannequin anymore

It does look a lot better now and I know how hard it is to do one of these.

she looks great at a first glance but her skin has no texture! that's whats making her look like a doll. and you forgot to fix HER HANDS!

gud entry

human skin is a hard thing to play with . I think she looks as if she has had a bad nip and tuck. sorry. Good entry over all GL